ESSAY WRITING 101: HOW TO GET A FIRST/A* IN ANY ESSAY

ESSAY WRITING 101: HOW TO GET A FIRST/A* IN ANY ESSAY

ESSAY WRITING 101: HOW TO GET A FIRST/A* IN ANY ESSAY

I’ve been preparing to start my masters after a one-year break from academia, so I’m a little apprehensive about getting into essay writing again. I found a great resource on my University’s website, giving a universal guide to writing a First Class essay. If you’re about to start your first year at uni, want a refresher, or are taking essay-based classes at your high school, this is the post for you!

C O M P R E H E N S I O N

Use a wide range of relevant sources, well understood and fully appreciated.

What do I need to do?

Read beyond the recommended reading given to you or the textbook in class. Can you explain what you’ve read to someone who isn’t studying your course - if not, do you really understand it?   

C R I T I Q U E

Ability to set sources and view points in context and evaluate contributions. Methodological awareness and theoretical appreciation.

What do I need to do?

I posted here about the WHAT-HOW-WHY paragraph structure. The critique is your WHY. WHY is the source written in that way? What was the context of the time or geographical location where it was written? Can either have impacted the writing? What are the limitations to the source - have they avoided discussing something that you believe vital to their argument? Critical thinking is the key to obtaining the highest marks in an essay.

A N A L Y S I S

Excellent answer to the question. Locates suitable concepts and makes a comprehensive assessment of issues involved. Understands the relevant theories and applies them to answering the question.

What do I need to do?

Answer the question. It seems silly but answer the question. What are you actually being asked to talk about, and are there any limiting factors (e.g. a specific time period)? Make sure that everything you’re saying is relevant to the question. If you’re anything like me, going off on a tangent is second nature. A good tip is to read your essay aloud to yourself - if you can sense you’re waffling on about something, then cut it out. 

P R E S E N T A T I O N

Well structured and planned. Clear, articulate style (good spelling, grammar, and syntax.) Proper referencing and bibliography. Confident presentation and appropriate length.

What do I need to do?

Plan plan plan. I never really understood the importance of proper essay planning before I got to University, but it really cannot be emphasised enough. Try and plan in a cyclical sense, taking a thematic approach to your writing and ensuring your main thesis argument is clear throughout your writing. It can be good to break one large essay into 2 or 3 smaller ones, but make sure that they are well connected and don’t read in a disjointed manner. Linking your introduction and conclusion can be an excellent way to ensure that your essay reads fluidly. Another top tip for writing a conclusion is to point your reader to further reading in the area you’re writing about - this helps to place your work as part of the academic conversation on the topic.

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Hi, It’s been a few months, I hope everyone is doing well. I found these pair of pants randomly in the black hole of ea’s unusable and hidden clothing, and realised that the design actually had a lot of potential although the mesh did not. It also had only one swatch, so I added a couple more. overall I think these turned out really well.

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Chapter 13: Urbanization Key Issue 1:Where Have Urban Areas Grown?

        Urbanization

·         The process by which the population of cities grows

·         Currently 400 cities have over 1 million inhabitants

There are two basic dimensions of urbanization:

        Increasing Percentage of People in Cities

·         The percentage of people living in areas determines the development of a country

o        In MDCs ¾ of people live in urban areas

o        In LDCs 2/5 of people live in urban areas

·         A consequence of changes in economic structure during the past two centuries is the higher percentage of urban residents in MDCs.

·         Rural residents have migrated from the countryside to work in the factories and services that are concentrated in cities. This results in the higher percentage of urban dwellers

·         In MDCs the process of urbanization that began around 1800 has largely ended, because the percentages living in urban areas cannot increase much more.

·         Recently, in LDCs, percentage living in cities has increased because of migration. This migration is due to workers looking for work.

        Increasing Number of People in Cities

·         MDCs have a higher percentage of urban residents, but in LDCs the cities are physically bigger.

·         6/10 of these most populous countries are in LDCs: Buenos Aires, Delhi, Jakarta, Seoul, Mexico City, Mumbai, and Sao Paulo.

·         The urban areas in LDCs dominate both lists of largest urban areas is remarkable, because urban growth historically has resulted from diffusion of the Industrial Revolution.

·         London was the world’s largest city in 1900.

·         The rapid growth of cities in the LDCs is a reversal of the historical trend in Western Europe and North America created by the Industrial Revolution and isn’t a measure of an improved level of development.

        Defining Urban Settlements

        Social Differences Between Urban and Rural Settlements

o        Louis Wirth, a social scientist, defined a city as a permanent settlement that has three characteristics: large size, high population density, and socially heterogeneous people.

·         Large Size

o        The social relationships within settlements are highly affected by the urbanization of the settlement.

·         High Density

o        Usually, when there’s a high number of people living in a small place, they all must have specific jobs in order to keep the settlement running.

·         Social Heterogeneity

o        Urban settlements tend to be more diverse and open to differences. In rural areas it is often expected to be like remotely similar to everyone else and unusual aberrations are more likely to be noticed and disapproved of.

        Physical Definitions of Urban Settlements

·         Legal Definition of a City

o        Defined as an urban settlement that has been legally incorporated into an independent, self-governing unit.  

o        In the U.S., a city that is surrounded by suburbs is sometimes called a central city.

·         Urbanized City

o        In the U.S., the central city and surrounding built up suburbs is called an urbanized area.

o        An urbanized area must consist of a central city plus its contiguous built-up suburbs where population density exceeds 1,000 people/persons per square miles.

·         Metropolitan Statistical Area (MSA)

o        Method of measuring a functional area of a city by the U.S. Bureau of Census

o        Includes:

·         Urbanized areas with a population of at least 50,000

·         Country within which the city is located

·         Adjacent counties with a high population density and a large percentage of residents working in the central city’s county.

o        An issue with MSAs is that some MSAs include an extensive of area that is not urban.

o        Micropolitan statistical areas are Smaller urban areas that includes

·         Between 10,000 and 50,000 inhabitants

·         County in which it is formed

·         Adjacent counties tied to the city

·         Overlapping Metropolitan Areas

o        A county between two central cities may send a large number of commuters to job in each.

o        BoshWash Corridor is the Megalopolis in the US that reaches from Boston to Washington DC

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Moon Powder

moon powder

sooo i recently dropped my selenite sphere :( which was very upsetting. i saved all of the pieces and had been wondering how to best use them. i ultimately decided to make a powder.

selenite- purification, removes blocks to healing, angelic protection

eucalyptus seeds/ leaves- healing/protection/purification

jasmine- love/money/prophetic dreams

marshmallow root powder- protection/psychic powers/purification/love

these were the ingredients i decided on. i ground them all together, beginning with the selenite because it was the most difficult + i said a prayer and imagined my personal intentions for the powder. every ingredient i used is associated with the divine feminine, the element of water, and the moon, making it a super potent powder.  i’m not going to be using this as a bath powder, i’ll most likely be using it in moon rituals/candle magik/floor washing etc. also, it smells nice and looks lovely :)

[[this would also work as a fertility powder. both selenite and marshmallow root powder are associated with fertility. also, the addition of the eucalyptus seeds, symbolizing birth/fertility]]

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7 years ago
⭐️ Strengthen Our Bond ⭐️

⭐️ Strengthen Our Bond ⭐️

A couple people asked me to post the spell for the spell jar I made the other day! This is the first spell I’ve posted, so let me know if you need clarification with anything. I’m happy to answer any questions 💖

This spell jar is intended to create a stronger connection with your loved one and protect the connection from weakening.

Note: Any of these ingredients can be substituted, omitted, or things can be added for a more specific intent.

What you’ll need:

A cute jar! *Himalayan Pink Salt - friendship, love and purification *Rose Petals - healing, love and protection *Peppermint Leaves - love, lust and protection (use tea if you don’t have mint leaves on you!) I also used peppermint flowers because they’re so pretty 😊 *Coltsfoot - love and peace *Rose Quartz - friendship, happiness and love *Amethyst - peace and protection *Apple seeds - love, protection and purification. (And fertility if that’s what you’re going for) *Lavender - happiness, love, peace, protection and purification *Jasmine - love Incense - I used strawberry for love (and it smells really good!) but you can use jasmine, rose, or lavender if you’d like! String (pink if you have it!) White and pink candles A funnel for the herbs if you need it!

* - going into the jar

So first I layered all of the ingredients in the order they are listed in the jar. Focus on the correspondence you feel in each item as you place them into the jar. Then, I sealed the jar with white and pink wax. Practice fire safety when doing this, please! And don’t get wax in your carpet like I did.

Next comes the string - it’s a perfect opportunity to incorporate knot magick if you practice that! Visualize the connection between you and your lover growing tighter and stronger as you pull the knot closed. Giving it a few extra tugs doesn’t hurt!

Finally, I passed the spell jar through my incense and sung a love song. If you’re not comfortable singing, try saying a poem out loud that reminds you of your beloved!

I’m planning to give this jar to my beloved on Valentine’s Day, but you can always give it to yourself for some self-love 💕

5 years ago

Tumblr Resources to Get You Through the School Year!

Hi guys!! Thank you all so much for your support!!! Happy 250 (EDIT: I SPENT A DAY ON THIS AND NOW IM PAST 300) and hope you all have a great start to the month! The community is more welcoming with all of you - I haven’t faced negativity from anyone at all. None of these are my posts - but they’ve helped me out a lot. With that said - let’s get started:

For bujos/planners:

This is one of my side blogs, and has tons of inspiration for weekly and monthly spreads, as well as a few aesthetic ideas and how to start one. I update this constantly.

How to start a studyblr - Studyblrs with creative fields

Lighting (for photos)

Study spreads

Planning your month

Printables (the same as some used down there but in a different category):

Weekly printable

To - do printable

Cornell Notes printable

Back to school printables

Daily Planner  @theorganisedstudent

Weekly Planner II @theorganisedstudent

Essay Planner @theorganisedstudent

Assignment Planner @theorganisedstudent

Assignment Tracker

Novel Notes

Plot Diagrams

Correction Sheets

Grid & lined paper

Weekly schedule for studying

Printables masterpost

Exam printable & how to use it

2018 Calender set (by my QUEEN @emmastudies)

For students:

Exams & Studying:

Exam revision guide

How to beat different types of procrastination

How to deal with a crappy teacher (this has to do with studying ig)

Study tips!! (its a masterpost)

Exam Printable & How to Use it

Exam & Homework tips

Coping with hell i mean exams i mean hell

A cool studying outline to try

This is my favorite thing and it’s when to use certain remembering techniques

Correction Sheets

Memorization tips for different learners

Weekly study schedule

More sites to use in normal studying routines

How to study smarter and not harder

Study smarter II

Exam printable & how to use it

Self discipline 

Study methods

Hoe tips for school and studying

Studying masterpoint

Tips and tricks to studying

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Note - Taking:

Lecture notes

How i set up flash cards (these are nice to study from but be determined to finish setting them up)

Nifty highlighting idea (this post is so old)

Highlighting idea that i actually use

How to take Cornell Notes

Cornell style notes printable (gridded)

Notebook paper (grid & lined)

Tips for pretty notes!!

How to take notes

Notes for different classes

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Back - to -school guide

Things I learned as a college freshman

Get ORGANIZED

Textbooks are expensive so here’s some free ones…

Tips for working students that sound extra but may work for u ily don’t overwork urselves

Masterpost for motivation and stuff

Get ur life together again bc haha i stay organized for like a day anyway

School supplies that u should have just to stay minimal

Grad school tips

Organization masterpost

Productive afterschool routine

30 websites to kill boredom

Back to school masterpost

Get confident in presentations

Overcome procrastination

Succeeding in school masterpost

For bad days 

For bad days II

A GOOD MASTERPOST for getting ur life together 

General school tips 

Free online courses

GOOD POWERPOINT TIPS

Sites to learns stuff

More learning stuff sites

Dealing with a trashy class

Study resources masterpost

Summer Productivity

Summer life tips

PLEASE READ THIS THIS IS SUCH AN IMPORTANT MASTERPOST 

Honest guide to college 

University tips

SCHOOL MINDSET

What to do on Sundays

Back to school masterpost

Useful things for going back to school

How to clean your house

Cute self care tips!

More self care tips

Plant care tips!

English:

A handy list of words to fit into ur essays

How to write an article like a journalist

Words to replace over-used words

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Get gucci while reading and be an active reader

Get gud reading them academic articles amigo

Words to replace “the author or whatever shows…” bc that is baby writing and i accidentally used that on an essay and i failed so

Novel notes

Plot Diagrams

Reading Lists

Literary techniques (what themes, personifications, metaphors are etc)

Discussing in English

How to top a literature class

Literature class masterpost

Strong/weak verbs

More essay tips!!

MLA format - a how to

ESSAY GRADER.

How to avoid essay cliches

Chemistry (I’m taking chem so i have a few resources aha)

Da terms on exam papers

Chemistry resources masterpost

Cute periodic tables

Study chapters

History/Social Studies

How to write a history paper

AP world history powerpoints masterpost

Math 

General tips

Resources

Understanding math masterpost

Test Prep

PSAT I

PSAT II

ACT tips!

100 words for the SATs (start studying early!!)

Thank you so much for the support! I couldn’t have done it without all of you. A simple reblog or like will help others see these tips, and will be very appreciated. I hope these links work - feel free to message me with questions and other links!! A possible part 2 might come out at the end of august, and one for languages!!!

7 years ago

🌄Morning Witchcraft☀️: how to connect to the elements

These are some of my tips for connecting to the elements in the morning before school, work, busy days, or just a day at home. It’s also handy for witches like me who prefer to work in the morning and daytime 🌞

☁️Air-

💨wake up at dawn if you can (dawn is the time that correspondes with air)

💨pick a perfume that correspondes with your intent for the rest of the day

💨listen to some music to set intent for the day and energize yourself

💨get some fresh air and let the crisp morning air invigorate and center you

💨light incense that correspondences with your intent of the day

💨enjoy the morning bird chirping

💨do a daily divination reading to get a feel for what to expect for the rest of the day

💨incorporate almonds, honey, strong scented herbs like dill, or eggs in your breakfast

Water🌊-

💧have a cup of tea or some water when you wake up

💧take a shower or bath and let it cleanse you

💧take a morning swim if you can

💧moisturize with lotion that correspondes with your intent for the day

💧make a water bottle of infused water (with the herbs/fruits of your intent) to carry around and keep you hydrated for the day

💧collect morning dew

💧pick a seashell that correspondes with your intent for the day to carry around with you

💧sing! (to connect to mermaids and warm up your voice for the day)

💧incorporate apples, berries, salt, fish, or avocado in your breakfast

Earth🌳-

🌿take a walk or jog

🌿do some yoga

🌿pick a crystal that correspondes with your intent for the day to carry with you

🌿ground yourself

🌿take care of your plants (water them, talk to them, etc.)

🌿do a prosperity spell for the day

🌿spend time with your pets

🌿use plant based products or make your own if you can (like shampoo, soap, makeup, etc.)

🌿incorporate nuts, beans, roots (like ginger), and greens (like spinach and kale) in your breakfast

Fire🔥-

🕯light a candle to set your intent for the day

🕯enjoy the morning sunshine, feel it’s warmth

🕯do some makeup or fashion magic when you’re getting ready

🕯meditate with the Sun

🕯take vitamins and/or medications

🕯stay warm with hot teas, hot showers, blankets, etc. (the morning can be a bit chilly)

🕯use the sunshine as a positivity and happiness spell and let it charge you for the day

🕯carry a tealight with you (you never know when you’ll need one)

🕯incorporate citrus and spices (like cinnamon, peppers, etc) into your breakfast

7 years ago

Resources for Storm and Weather Magic

Updated: March 30th 2016

GENERAL INFORMATION

[Collecting Storm Water] (an ask)

[Combining Storm Craft and Knot Craft] (an ask)

[Creating or Moving Weather] (an ask)

[Drawing Energy From Storms] (an ask)

[An Intro to Weather Magic]

[A Little Weather Witchery]

[Magic for a Snow Storm]

[Resources: Rain Water]

[Resources: Storm Water]

[Snow Magic]

[Storm Catching - Cyclone Stopper]

[Storm Craft Basics]

[Storm Crystals : Banded Amethyst | Chrysocolla in Quartz | Snowflake Obsidian]

[Storm Scrying]

[Storm Water]

[Storm Water vs Rain Water] (an ask)

[Stormcraft]

[Summoning Wind Without Whistling] (an ask)

[Tentative Steps: Beginning Storm Witchery]

[Tips for Starting Storm Craft]

[Tools of a Storm/Weather Witch] (an ask)

[Traditional Storm Raising Methods]

[Weather]

[Weather Magic] (tw: gif)

[Weather Magic for the Sailor]

[Weather Magic - Storm Casting]

[Weather Station Symbols for Sigils]

[Weather Symbols for Sigils]

[Whistling Up a Wind]

SPELLS AND SIGILS

(Note: spells that involve storm water are included)

[Air Lock Spell] (to help drive away bad weather)

[To Bring a Storm]

[Calm After the Storm Elixir]

[Charm to Seal Up a Storm]

[A Chant to Bring in a Storm and Strengthen Witches’ Power]

[Chant to Make It Windy] (tw: gif)

[“Clouds produce rain”] (tw: sigil)

[Cold Weather Box]

[A Colorful Sunny Day Spell]

[Cottage Crafts: Elemental Magic Storm Ward] (a home protection charm that draws its power from the energy of passing storm systems)

[Drought Spell] (to work with the element of air to bring a storm / fix a drought) (tw: sigil)

[Electric Charge Spell] (to increase one’s energy, motivation, and focus) (tw: gif)

[Forget Me Spell]

[Glamour Jar for Intimidating Looks]

[“Grey Cloud” Curse]

[Heavy Rain Spell]

[Holiday Ornament Snow Spell]

[Hurricane Curse]

[“I direct rain towards the places that need it”] (tw: sigil)

[“I influence the weather around me with ease”] (tw: sigil)

[To Lessen a Storm]

[Let It Snow]

[A let it snow sigil] (tw: sigil)

[Let’s Try a Spell: When It Rains] (for a better perspective)

[A Light in the Storm] (to aid in the healing of seasonal depression)

[Protection From Storm]

[“Protection from storms”] (tw: sigil)

[Protective Storm Ward]

[Rain-Banishing Spell]

[Rain-Calling Chant]

[Rain Spell / Storm Spell / Sigils for Rain / Sigils for Thunder / Sigils for Lightning] (tw: sigil)

[Rain Summoning Spell]

[Rainy Day Anxiety Spell]

[Rainy Day Spell to Clear Negative Energy]

[To Raise a Storm] (tw: gif)

[Sea Witch Rain Spell]

[Sigil for Bringing Clouds / Rain] (tw: sigil)

[Snow Spell] (tw: gif)

[Snow-Summoning Sigils] (tw: sigil)

[A Song of Storms]

[“Song of Storms” Enchantment] (for whistling up rain/storms) (tw: gif)

[Spell for Sunshine]

[Spell to Attract Rain]

[A Spell to Ward Off Rain] (tw: sigil)

[Spells for Weather]

[Spells to End a Storm]

[“Stop Rain” Sigil] (tw: sigil)

[Storm-Calling Spell]

[A Storm Chant]

[Storm of Tears and Nightmares Curse]

[Storm Spell] (to summon a storm)

[Storm Witch’s Transformation Spell]

[Summon a Storm]

[Summon a Storm Spell]

[Summoning rain and storms sigil] (tw: sigil)

[“Sun to cloud, cloud to rain, rain freezes and turns to snow”] (tw: sigil)

[Sunshine Spell]

[Teru Teru Bouzu] (a sunny day spell)

[Thunder Cake] (to help connect with the storm’s energy; to honor the storm; to ask for protection)

[Thunderstorm in a Jar]

[Untie the Wind] (to increase and decrease wind)

[Ward Water]

[Warm Weather Chant]

[The weather is cool and pleasant] (tw: sigil)

[“The weather is in favor of snow”] (tw: sigil)

[Wind Spell for Inspiration & Creativity]

[Winter (Snow) Spell for Anxiety]

STORM / WEATHER MAGIC BLOGS

[rainy-day-witchcraft]

[stormbornwitch]

[stormsorceress]

[stormwaterwitch]

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