Elwin: We Call That A Traumatic Event

Elwin: We call that a traumatic event

Elwin, turning to Fitz: Not a “bruh moment”

Elwin, turning to Sophie: Not a “major L”

Elwin, turning to Keefe: And definitely not an “OOF lmao”

More Posts from Crispyzom and Others

10 months ago
The Illegal Alien After Getting Their Transgender Operations In Prison

the illegal alien after getting their transgender operations in prison


Tags
3 months ago

Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

3 months ago

it's funny to me that the entry level requirement for being a good captain america is that you have to be in love with Bucky Barnes and that's why john walker was a shit one

4 years ago

Sandor: I spy with my little eye, something that starts with 's.'

Ro: *looks over at Sophie and Keefe*

Ro: Is it sexual tension?

Ro and I are one

1 year ago

Home.

Home.

first post here! I dont really know how tumblr works so bare with me haha

4 years ago

what techno taught ranboo about the legal system-

Big Law: Please sit in this chair, I’d like to ask you some questions

Technoblade, whispering to Ranboo: Deny everything

Ranboo, in a monotone voice: That’s not a chair

4 years ago

This last to be my absolute favorite post on here

Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar
Lainey Molnar

Lainey Molnar

1 year ago

Can you imagine how confuddled Vader must have been at the bespin duel

Vader: he's trained with yoda and obi-wan, I shouldn't let my guard down - let's just test the waters

Luke: I'm going to do a jump here and oof oh no I'm backpedaling rn oh shit uhhh just slash and hack boys act like you know what you're doing stay calm stay calm

Vader: .....what the kriff is he doing

Vader: is this a new dueling tactic I've never heard of?

---

Luke: blindly slashes out his saber

Vader: that isn't part of any lightsaber form

Luke: djjdjshsh I think I'm doing well rn actually

Vader: what the fuck? What the fuck is this? Why did he respond to my attack with blindly flailing his arms about instead of the textbook parry? What's his plan?

---

Vader, crying: please.. please fight normally....

Luke: getting beaten up by flying debris if I'm confused the opponent is confused too

2 months ago
Welcome Back 2014 Marvel Tumblr

welcome back 2014 marvel tumblr

1 year ago
Another Lilo And Stitch Screenshot Redraw Bc Dialogue Was Spot On And It Would Be A Crime NOT To Use
Another Lilo And Stitch Screenshot Redraw Bc Dialogue Was Spot On And It Would Be A Crime NOT To Use
Another Lilo And Stitch Screenshot Redraw Bc Dialogue Was Spot On And It Would Be A Crime NOT To Use
Another Lilo And Stitch Screenshot Redraw Bc Dialogue Was Spot On And It Would Be A Crime NOT To Use

another Lilo and Stitch screenshot redraw bc dialogue was spot on and it would be a crime NOT to use it 🥹

  • alexkittyandra
    alexkittyandra liked this · 8 months ago
  • lun33
    lun33 reblogged this · 10 months ago
  • lun33
    lun33 liked this · 10 months ago
  • ilykoltc
    ilykoltc liked this · 11 months ago
  • anshuist
    anshuist liked this · 1 year ago
  • sunnyathens
    sunnyathens liked this · 1 year ago
  • uncookedkatsu
    uncookedkatsu reblogged this · 1 year ago
  • glass-ghost
    glass-ghost liked this · 2 years ago
  • fandoms-overload
    fandoms-overload liked this · 2 years ago
  • ybwmheartattack
    ybwmheartattack liked this · 2 years ago
  • koryphaea
    koryphaea liked this · 2 years ago
  • thirstyratsnake
    thirstyratsnake liked this · 2 years ago
  • lxrxine
    lxrxine liked this · 2 years ago
  • chillychive
    chillychive liked this · 2 years ago
  • omfals
    omfals liked this · 2 years ago
  • alike-chocolate1013
    alike-chocolate1013 liked this · 2 years ago
  • sunyurii
    sunyurii liked this · 2 years ago
  • mystrixstory
    mystrixstory liked this · 2 years ago
  • marvelall
    marvelall liked this · 2 years ago
  • ariallaisawesome
    ariallaisawesome liked this · 2 years ago
  • crispyzom
    crispyzom reblogged this · 2 years ago
  • iceblue-books
    iceblue-books liked this · 2 years ago
  • void-kill
    void-kill liked this · 2 years ago
  • thepinkdove
    thepinkdove liked this · 2 years ago
  • solvynessa-solvynessin
    solvynessa-solvynessin liked this · 2 years ago
  • alvarvacker-ceo
    alvarvacker-ceo liked this · 2 years ago
  • kliniosminilkn1102
    kliniosminilkn1102 liked this · 2 years ago
  • p0tterhead2000
    p0tterhead2000 liked this · 2 years ago
  • istanrandomfandoms
    istanrandomfandoms liked this · 2 years ago
  • ranyaaz2
    ranyaaz2 liked this · 2 years ago
  • acornz
    acornz liked this · 2 years ago
  • analyzedtheft
    analyzedtheft liked this · 2 years ago
  • lokistolemysprite
    lokistolemysprite liked this · 2 years ago
  • poltergeist-bunn
    poltergeist-bunn liked this · 2 years ago
  • beautifulenemychild
    beautifulenemychild liked this · 2 years ago
  • morgan3o00
    morgan3o00 liked this · 2 years ago
  • nashoe
    nashoe liked this · 2 years ago
  • shameless-bookhoe
    shameless-bookhoe liked this · 2 years ago
  • mentallyunstablebutilovestuff
    mentallyunstablebutilovestuff liked this · 2 years ago
  • jacksjargon
    jacksjargon liked this · 3 years ago
  • vgracecurtis
    vgracecurtis liked this · 3 years ago
  • corruption-exe
    corruption-exe reblogged this · 3 years ago
  • therealsophieelizabethfoster
    therealsophieelizabethfoster liked this · 3 years ago
  • sleepysheikahtortl
    sleepysheikahtortl liked this · 3 years ago
  • crispyzom
    crispyzom liked this · 3 years ago
  • cryingat3amblog
    cryingat3amblog liked this · 3 years ago
  • ellylikeskotlc
    ellylikeskotlc liked this · 3 years ago
crispyzom - your friendly neighborhood bisexual
your friendly neighborhood bisexual

she/they 20 gay af too many hyperfixations to count spend more time thinking out stories than writing them 🤌🤌

234 posts

Explore Tumblr Blog
Search Through Tumblr Tags